tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post4796648626223628102..comments2023-08-10T07:43:54.472-07:00Comments on Black Keys: Black Keys Chapter 30R. B. Mhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16058247577447199860noreply@blogger.comBlogger44125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-37662053199783099972015-03-15T14:24:25.279-07:002015-03-15T14:24:25.279-07:00Amazing chapter Rose! She kissed him! She frigging...Amazing chapter Rose! She kissed him! She frigging kissed him.<br /><br />Tho I am worried about the spy. x xHopeful Healerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18196030876347086482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-91889136557082035772015-02-28T06:39:47.317-08:002015-02-28T06:39:47.317-08:00Well done Marie! GO with your heart and it will n...Well done Marie! GO with your heart and it will not fail you.lilypadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17477517061339804734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-91194888320223166702015-02-26T23:35:44.079-08:002015-02-26T23:35:44.079-08:00Great chapter
AMGreat chapter<br />AMAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-62591013608210278322015-02-26T16:08:43.828-08:002015-02-26T16:08:43.828-08:00You have a way with words that draws the reader in...You have a way with words that draws the reader in. I really look forward to each chapter. Each word or action has a purpose. I feel as if I am a part of their world when I am reading. Very original story line you have going. I have never read a fanfiction with this particular plot. I am SO thrilled that you are moving the story forward and there is finally communication between Marie and the Prince. Too many fanfictions start off so well and even if the words are beautiful, they become stagnant if there is little to no forward progress in the plot. Great job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-56309594065588822332015-02-26T10:30:18.312-08:002015-02-26T10:30:18.312-08:00I love your story.. I have my theories on where it...I love your story.. I have my theories on where it is heading. I hope Marie becomes Queen. I feel that if she does, she will be a threat to Jasem and whoever this spy is, as well as others who hold on to the old ways. She can influence Mazen and this is why I feel she is a threat. When Alica married Jasper, this blew their grand plan. (Jasem and whoever else is involved.) Jasem was trying to stop Alica from going to the states, but why? I wouldn't be surprised if these spies don't want Alica with Jasper because they want Talia as their queen, not Marie. Somehow it is linked. But who knows, I could be off base!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-38334435073776044312015-02-26T08:48:34.827-08:002015-02-26T08:48:34.827-08:00Well, I can't put into words how much I am tot...Well, I can't put into words how much I am totally hooked on this story!!!! You are very talented!! Can't wait for an update!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00598492463711560072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-90323224833162403962015-02-26T08:40:05.781-08:002015-02-26T08:40:05.781-08:00It may have been a long road, but a very necessary...It may have been a long road, but a very necessary one. We have learned that the seed of sadness that was misdirected was nurtured and crew into a dangerous infection. Perhaps this kiss and the birth of a niece or nephew will be bit of the cure<br />Rebadams7Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-51160258230141981212015-02-26T04:37:36.435-08:002015-02-26T04:37:36.435-08:00I tried to post review from my phone but it doesnt...I tried to post review from my phone but it doesnt work. I love this chapter. I love how marie being so sweet to Mazen. I feel touch when she told mazen that what jaser did to her is because he love alica more than his own sister. She said that to make mazen in peace. That the sweetest thing.<br />Mazen as a good brother he think about his sister safety and willing to do anythinf for her. Bothmof them meet in unexpected event but on the journey they found love.<br />I hope marie will do something soon so nobody have to question mazen manhood :D lol<br />Thanks for the update 😘Mamasensyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11033950770967862046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-31592009146141096602015-02-26T03:56:53.535-08:002015-02-26T03:56:53.535-08:00So good story! More please :)So good story! More please :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-60197416178181952012015-02-26T00:15:45.722-08:002015-02-26T00:15:45.722-08:00Thank you for the updateThank you for the updateAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-54779435889989019352015-02-25T23:38:34.459-08:002015-02-25T23:38:34.459-08:00I so love this story loved the chapterI so love this story loved the chaptertwilight junnkihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11022023586796527471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-34710392455861761462015-02-25T20:24:18.424-08:002015-02-25T20:24:18.424-08:00Awesome chapter. Thanks for updating so fast!Awesome chapter. Thanks for updating so fast!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14489660358438092436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-69791076526156018552015-02-25T17:45:16.377-08:002015-02-25T17:45:16.377-08:00ABOUT TIME!!!! Things are getting so good between ...ABOUT TIME!!!! Things are getting so good between them... It makes me ecstatic!!! :D<br />I'm so in love with this story it's INSANE!!!! <br />how many more chapters are left?? I don't want this beautiful journey to end :( 💕<br /><br />Xoxo <br />MaheenMaheen Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01330741720053127410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-79544263068055240612015-02-25T16:09:46.007-08:002015-02-25T16:09:46.007-08:00Loved it Loved it Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-26878068429494186302015-02-25T14:38:15.764-08:002015-02-25T14:38:15.764-08:00Talking, touching, and kissing .... wonderful!Talking, touching, and kissing .... wonderful!Violetnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-66533938679795519172015-02-25T14:11:27.538-08:002015-02-25T14:11:27.538-08:00ahhh!! Yay!! so so happy they're still talki...ahhh!! Yay!! so so happy they're still talking, and getting closer...and absolutely love that she finally just let her heart lead, and is actually changing her thinking about Mazen and remaining with him, at least for a little while :)<br />loved the quick update...can't wait for the next chapter!!stephnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-81123978324389116162015-02-25T13:43:39.289-08:002015-02-25T13:43:39.289-08:00Thank you! I'm very glad she decided to follow...Thank you! I'm very glad she decided to follow her heart because, in her heart, she does love him. I wonder who the spy is....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16113111046214779206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-85795264997747545482015-02-25T13:14:42.999-08:002015-02-25T13:14:42.999-08:00Wonderful! She is learning so much more about him....Wonderful! She is learning so much more about him.<br /><br />SO HAPPY that she kissed him!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02566022561797061867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-84260750065561286772015-02-25T12:33:21.256-08:002015-02-25T12:33:21.256-08:00I feel as though I am watching an Arab version of ...I feel as though I am watching an Arab version of a Shakespeare play. That is how much you bring this story to life. As a Muslim, I really, really love how you show us in a positive light; so thank you for that. <br />You also finally got a review out of me so I salute you for it. I also wanted to say that I cannot wait to see what happens as this story progresses. <br /><br />Mimigirl Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10323568063638830852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-45661405321893717972015-02-25T11:30:03.443-08:002015-02-25T11:30:03.443-08:00Finally! She's giving in to her feelings I can...Finally! She's giving in to her feelings I can't wait to see his reaction.analiticahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01667161126821841693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-62332783790957693032015-02-25T11:03:35.302-08:002015-02-25T11:03:35.302-08:00Rawwwwrrrr........ uh-huh....... hot!Rawwwwrrrr........ uh-huh....... hot!irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14687919442161262561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-2855369396970231542015-02-25T10:53:06.782-08:002015-02-25T10:53:06.782-08:00Hi
Happy that Marie took the first step, glad are ...Hi<br />Happy that Marie took the first step, glad are getting along.<br />Angelik Angel<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-44799522057484420632015-02-25T10:21:21.217-08:002015-02-25T10:21:21.217-08:00Awww be still my beating heart....talk about fluff...Awww be still my beating heart....talk about fluff. I loved this chapter. Poor Mazen has so much on his shoulder. Yes kiss your man, maybe let him squeeze a boobie or two lol I kid Rose (not).<br />I like the quick updates, they speaking to you Uh?<br />Bring it on, I'm not complaining!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01850710421620474621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-49574041341036278522015-02-25T09:55:24.699-08:002015-02-25T09:55:24.699-08:00About time Bella!! Im glad she finally kissed Maze...About time Bella!! Im glad she finally kissed Mazen! Hope that they can finally admit their feeling for each other very soon, and maybe more can happen next!! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15096580389154811825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-249509268578150662015-02-25T08:31:04.442-08:002015-02-25T08:31:04.442-08:00Wow. *I'm totally fanning myself here*. You...Wow. *I'm totally fanning myself here*. You're really knocking these updates out of the park woman. I love it, keep them coming. I'm all infatuated again with this story. I'm delighted the "Princess" is beginning to settle and find her bearings and is slowly starting to trust & open up herself to him (she's just obeying her body here, she's no choice really. Can't say I blame her!) and allow this story to gain pace. To be honest it was like coming up for air and finally taking a good deep breath. <br />What a relief. <br />I know it's not going to be all plain sailing from here, but I look forward to meeting these obstacles right along with them. <br />In fact I'll relish it. <br />Again Kudos for all the recent updates, "you're playing a blinder" as we say here in Dublin. <br />There's a lot to be said for a good slow burn and this story is smoking. I'm looking for the source of that smoke now, I want those flames!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com