tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post2916434686720161925..comments2023-08-10T07:43:54.472-07:00Comments on Black Keys: Black Keys Chapter 33R. B. Mhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16058247577447199860noreply@blogger.comBlogger55125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-85078371137561215822015-03-13T00:53:01.972-07:002015-03-13T00:53:01.972-07:00im so close to cry and if the princess leave now t...im so close to cry and if the princess leave now that she has feeling for him I will cry for days. and I don't think the princess would leave well I hope she does not.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10150989378294937298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-40751284486721833602015-03-10T15:12:17.556-07:002015-03-10T15:12:17.556-07:00Another wonderful, but scary chapter. this is a ve...Another wonderful, but scary chapter. this is a very well thought out story and it teaches many lessons to its readers. It becomes very obvious that when you put power in the hands of the wrong person, meaning the Queen, this is the result. I would love to know what her punishment will be, and I hope that her power is taken from her, as a person such as her should never hold so much weight. I remember Emmad and Mazen allowed the Queen to believe that it was she who decided Alica's fate. This Queen has been planning Mazen's life since he was born, down to who he would marry. I hope the Prince can join Marie in the states, or she stays with him. They need to work on their relationship and Mazen needs to understand that we can only try our best to keep a promise, but sometimes there are circumstances beyond our control.bcc06https://www.blogger.com/profile/16142500939355050478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-45448954897785259942015-03-08T12:16:11.868-07:002015-03-08T12:16:11.868-07:00I'm not one to comment on stories. I like to r...I'm not one to comment on stories. I like to read and observe the story, I'm not one to leave fanfiction.net to follow a story. Yet here I am, I have to say this is a very good and interesting story. A+! Came a cross this story last night and couldn't put it down. Hope to read more soon. Again, good story hope to read more. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14189411622979372086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-42109772914351229532015-03-07T21:05:19.237-08:002015-03-07T21:05:19.237-08:00I'M SPEECHLESS!!! I can't express with wor...I'M SPEECHLESS!!! I can't express with words how much I love this story.. Marie will leave arab?? leave Mazen?? PLEASE DON'T!!! amazing chapter as always. update soon,please.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-16958723381544377392015-03-07T19:51:49.656-08:002015-03-07T19:51:49.656-08:00Wow! I recently came across this story. Wonderful ...Wow! I recently came across this story. Wonderful writing. Amazing story. Gut wrenching chapter. Thank you and please update soon. I am on the edge. Hope she doesn't leave him.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-89315586730380100142015-03-07T19:05:52.349-08:002015-03-07T19:05:52.349-08:00Thank you so much for the update.
I have to tell ...Thank you so much for the update. <br />I have to tell you I love your stories, you take us through an emotional journey that has us right there with Mazen and Marie. I can't wait till the next update!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-57750716486249738712015-03-07T16:59:41.883-08:002015-03-07T16:59:41.883-08:00I just read the link you provided on deflowering. ...I just read the link you provided on deflowering. It states that this is forbidden in Islam and practiced by less educated people. This further supports Marie's fears of Muslims given that it is done though forbidden and by the Queen herself.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-29451080433039191852015-03-07T16:55:56.671-08:002015-03-07T16:55:56.671-08:00Thank you so much for this story.
So this is where...Thank you so much for this story.<br />So this is where he lets her go since he feels that he can't keep her safe. So sad, but it gives her a chance to come back as the mare he released did earlier. I hate that this is happening, but see that it needs to.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-31333271740945903112015-03-07T16:54:16.244-08:002015-03-07T16:54:16.244-08:00i hope that when it comes time to go home to the s...i hope that when it comes time to go home to the states, that she decides to stay and be with mazen instead of returning home. also hope that whatever the queen gets as punishment that it makes her regret that she messed with marie. keep up the good workAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16615540316153217789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-22413008242985090912015-03-07T12:49:29.376-08:002015-03-07T12:49:29.376-08:00I'm rooting for Mazen...Come on Marie...pick h...I'm rooting for Mazen...Come on Marie...pick him...don't go. :(limalisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16823477157525651669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-42445626718882232322015-03-07T11:44:31.232-08:002015-03-07T11:44:31.232-08:00He does love her, very much..if you haven't go...He does love her, very much..if you haven't gotten it from his actions and words...then i don't know. He loves her that much that is willing to let her go for her own safety and happiness, because he doesn't know the depth of her feelings for him yet. He thinks she just wants to go home.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-62914406993027582492015-03-07T11:35:47.723-08:002015-03-07T11:35:47.723-08:00I nearly pounced out of bed when I received this u...I nearly pounced out of bed when I received this update and boy did it not disappoint!! It was really intense. And heartbreaking in certain moments... I fucking hate that dumb ass Queen, she deserves whatever she gets, of course I'm not talking about Mother Queen, she's a sweetheart and I cannot believe the Queen Esmat practically tossed her out of her wheel chair!! That is just very disrespectful especially forward your elders! That virginity test was quite terrifying for Marie but I can imagine (*hush*being a virgin myself *hush*) it was so traumatizing that I think it bordered on rape (but not to the full extent) but thank god MAZEN saved the day.<br />I totally understand his anger and that sending Marie home might be his only way of keeping her safe but She only just realized how deep her feelings for him go. I sincerely hope that she doesn't jump at this chance just yet; she still needs some answers like why he ran away from her the previous night after almost bedding her and if his feelings for her have changed... Which I don't think they have changed much, perhaps just grown stronger. I blindly hope that if Marie does decide to go home that Mazen comes too (but I doubt it because of his duty to his people) so I guess the only alternative might just be that Marie convinces him that she loves him enough to stay by his side or she goes home and eventually comes back again or at least visits!! Anyways sorry for my ramble!! Absolutely terrifying and emotional chapter! I seriously cannot what for what comes next! You are truly a talent Rose!! Please update soon!! XoxoxoxoxoxoAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01088026252562500831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-91557640425495090782015-03-07T11:35:21.202-08:002015-03-07T11:35:21.202-08:00NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! if she leaves now there will neve...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! if she leaves now there will never be an HEA! Mazen will marry his cousin and be surrounded by evil women: his mother and Talia! He is in love with Marie. So sad :(<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02566022561797061867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-27281368342299862462015-03-07T10:11:04.248-08:002015-03-07T10:11:04.248-08:00Another great chapter. And how completely terrifyi...Another great chapter. And how completely terrifying for Marie. So glad he got there and stopped the queen in time as Marie would have never forgived for that act. I really hope they sit down and talk about their true feelings for each other before he tries to put her on that plane back to the states. This was a heartbreaking chapter and can't wait fur the next one to see what happens next! Jaime Fnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-59003346120655594762015-03-07T09:35:02.057-08:002015-03-07T09:35:02.057-08:00What a mess for both of them - can they find their...What a mess for both of them - can they find their way through this? That Queen.....grrrrrRebekah Adamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18416425204752032145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-89701609989029598802015-03-07T09:16:41.025-08:002015-03-07T09:16:41.025-08:00Masen should either leave the kingdom and study ps...Masen should either leave the kingdom and study psychiatry, or Marie should be crowned Queen and then she can abolish all these disgusting laws. All these so called "family Members" (Jasper, power hungry mental queen, and delusional she cousin who wants to grow babies) need to be swiftly "depowered" if you know what I mean. Then Marie can be the true Queen. Both Marie and Masen really have some winners (sarcasm) as far as family members go!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-87570479444263231752015-03-07T08:48:20.234-08:002015-03-07T08:48:20.234-08:00Very powerful and intense I felt I was there so mu...Very powerful and intense I felt I was there so much anger and determination as the Queen tried to deflower Isabella she may come across as an evil woman but she is trying to protect her sonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-9689407893922606132015-03-07T08:31:37.423-08:002015-03-07T08:31:37.423-08:00I'm not shocked he's come to this decision...I'm not shocked he's come to this decision. After all every time the turn a corner someone (including Marie 'before') gets in thier way. He feels his promise cannot be achieved with her being here so he would break his own heart and send her away.<br />They love each other but hasn't realised as yet how deep it runs.<br />Just now I Wana know how long it'll take them to find each other again?<br /><br />Oh and Marie, next time put some more power in the kicks. We looking to 'Ryu Ken' her ass then 'spin bird kick' those ritches out the room. Dunno why I'm quoting Street fighting but thought it fits lmao.<br /><br />Oh isn't this the first time she has called Mazen 'Mazen'? Hmmm<br />Talk about 2 cliffies, I hate heights if you didn't know!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01850710421620474621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-52025495986278942902015-03-07T08:14:11.311-08:002015-03-07T08:14:11.311-08:00Wow!such a harsh chapter. Glad for the continued s...Wow!such a harsh chapter. Glad for the continued support of Mona to Marie. So fortunate that Mazen arrived when he did. But Marie cannot go home yet; cannot leave Mazen! Waiting and holding my breath for the next chapter.<br /><br />AmberAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06976219474898520589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-71093757499601446672015-03-07T08:05:18.941-08:002015-03-07T08:05:18.941-08:00wow didn't see that coming... glad Mazen got t...wow didn't see that coming... glad Mazen got to her In time Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03065640777011940980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-69373741266748696402015-03-07T07:45:57.873-08:002015-03-07T07:45:57.873-08:00Excellent chapter! So intense and sad. I wonder ho...Excellent chapter! So intense and sad. I wonder how Marie will react to the news? I hope she confronts Mazen on why he stopped things the night before and what it means that he's sending her home now. Poor Mazen too. He's had to deal with so much. He's feels for her but his life has been turned upside down since they married. Cannot wait for the next chapter!Mystery14https://www.blogger.com/profile/14713305996910069585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-35933286170426297952015-03-07T07:38:58.667-08:002015-03-07T07:38:58.667-08:00Im torn about Marie leaving for the states or stay...Im torn about Marie leaving for the states or staying. I mean even Mazen would give his life to protect her, there is a lot of danger there especially from the women. The Queen and the bitch self proclaimed fiancee will plan something bad for MARIE. But if Marie leaves and the marriage is void, Mazen would be forced into an arranged marriage, one of political intentions, not love. He does not deserve this, he is too good to live a loveless life. Please make sure Marie tells him about her feelings for him have changed. Mazen thinks Marie does not love him, what she feels toward him is comfort, is being protected and safe, but things have changed. Please make them speak about their feelings at least, and then take it from there. thanks a lot for this amazing story, and please update soon, cant wait to see what happens next. Maybe he will go with her to the states...maybe she will stay...oh god the suspense is killing meAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-63675879941964982552015-03-07T07:22:52.816-08:002015-03-07T07:22:52.816-08:00ROSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARGH. Just..... thank you. Lov...ROSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARGH. Just..... thank you. Love this story. Queen Esmat needs to be punished! They should cut her head off. She's too power hungry, her words were scary. the worst punishment for her would be for Mazen to abdicate his title and leave the kingdom and the queen, but he loves the people too much to do that. I wouldn't talk to the bitch for the rest of my life if I was him. Like, ever. She just lost all respect in my eyes. A Queen (any royal, for that matter) must earn that title out of respect from the people and the family. You are really entitled to nothing just by birth. You gain respect from other, and the Queen just lost it all in my eyes. Mazen needs to think hard about what he will do. Ugh. Bitchhhhhh. Anyway, amazing chapter!! GAH. I wanted Marie to do something to save herself and not need Mazen but this was a difficult situation and time was of the essence. They need to talk and communicate before making any rash decisions. It would be healthy for Marie to go back to the states, even for a little while, but Mazen needs to go with her. IDKKKK. Gah!!!!!! Can't wait till next chapter. Thank you for updating so quickly <3Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-73559889075362532982015-03-07T07:18:41.501-08:002015-03-07T07:18:41.501-08:00Jeez, that was intense.............. No sympathy f...Jeez, that was intense.............. No sympathy for evil queenie from me........<br />Hope they have a good talk before any hasty decisions are made, though......irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14687919442161262561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2806912180935824724.post-74662223227371241562015-03-07T07:16:14.482-08:002015-03-07T07:16:14.482-08:00Thanks for frequent updates!!! I do love your stor...Thanks for frequent updates!!! I do love your story, you have no idea! Poor Marie. And poor Mazen, I hope she will be true to her heart. I am crazy curious how you are going to solve this one. See ya!!antoinessenoreply@blogger.com